ladytiresias ([personal profile] ladytiresias) wrote in [community profile] ff_exchange 2015-02-06 09:13 pm (UTC)

Re: FFI: Tending To You (F!Red Mage/F!Black Belt, NSFW, Explicit)

Yeah! Yeah!!

This is exactly the sort of thing I was picturing when I prompted this, so thank you so much for writing this so well! Seeing F/F is really nice, and I really liked that the Red Mage's lover was a Black Belt, since:

She had never been able to tap into her energies; her strength was in the discipline of the body and mind, in pushing herself to the limit.

was a really cool bit of meta; a BB/Monk would see and think about magic differently than, say, a Thief or a Fighter/Warrior.

I also liked that once things went into temperature play (eee!), the heat sensation was likened to drops of wax.

This is overall just a nice blend of sweet and sexy.

(One note: There are breaks in the past tense at "Juli sighed and looks up at her companion" and "The sudden chill sends shivers down her spine." Just wanted to point those out, in case you ever decide to archive this elsewhere! You should; it's so good.)

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